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The following appeared as part of an article in a health magazine: "A new discovery warrants a drastic change in the diets of people living in the United States. Two scientists have recently suggested that omega-3 fatty acids (found in some fish and fish oils) play a key role in mental health. Our ancestors, who ate less saturated fat and more polyunsaturated fat, including Omega-3 fatty acids, were much less likely to suffer from depression than we are today.

Moreover, modern societies, such as those in Japan and Taiwan, that consume large quantities of fish report depression rates lower than that in the United States. Given this link between omega-3 fatty acids and depression, it is important for all people in the United States to increase their consumption of fish in order to prevent depression."


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To trace mental health and depression to any single factor would be to miss the wood for the trees. Without necessarily disputing the accuracy of the discovery, it may be said that the scientists have tried only to establish a link between depression and saturated fat. Nowhere does the excerpt say that increased consumption of omega-3 fatty acids is a guarantee against depression.

Agreed that our ancestors, who ate less saturated fat and more polyunsaturated fat, including omega-3 fatty acids, were much less likely to suffer from depression than those of the present generation are. But our ancestors enjoyed certain other advantages not available to the modern American.

For instance, external factors and influences induce depression as surely as, and much faster than, the kind of food one eats does. For instance, an unemployed person cannot be saved from bouts of depression just through being fed more polyunsaturated fat, including omega-3 fatty acids.

The food one eats certainly influences one's mood, but so do several external factors. During the time of our ancestors there was little atmospheric pollution that is a very potent source of depression today. Besides, the population was infinitely smaller than it now is, and that helped greater social interaction than is possible at present when the world has more people than it can accommodate.

The latter fact is a definite source of depression induced by uncertainty about food, clothing and shelter, among other necessities of life. When there are 100 aspirants for one job, depression is bound to set in even if all of them have consumed less saturated fat. Besides, with the proliferation of population familial responsibilities and worries have multiplied, and that is the surest recipe imaginable for bouts of depression. It is true that the Japanese and the Taiwanese consume large quantities of fish. But even they would be rash to attribute lower rates of depression to that one factor. The lifestyle, the social milieu and the ethos of a people combine to insure that fewer people are depressed at fewer times than mere consumption of less saturated fat.

The Japanese, for instance, are too neurotically preoccupied with work and profits to have time to feel depressed. But even among them, those who fail to make the grade, those who are not the best, are overcome by depression and commit hara-kiri. Consumption of large quantities of fish does not come in their way.

Therefore, while increased consumption of fish, omega-3 fatty acids and less saturated fat might help physical health and mental hygiene, that alone cannot claim all the credit for lower rates of depression, if not for its disappearance.


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