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" The country Myria, which charges fees for the use of national parks, reports little evidence of environmental damage. This strongly suggests that for the country Illium, the best way to preserve public lands is to charge people more money when they are using national parks and wilderness areas for activities with heavy environmental impact.

By collecting fees from these people who overuse public lands, Illium will help preserve those lands for present and future generations."


Sample

That those who pay fees for use of national parks do not cause environmental damage is clearly a myth. Cases of people having paid entry fees and yet vandalized national parks are neither few nor far between. Indeed, there does not seem to be any connection between payment of fees for entry into national parks and other public lands and sparing of their environment.

If the country Myria, which charges fees for the use of national parks, has reported little evidence of environmental damage, the reason for environmental protection may lie elsewhere. It is possible that such of its residents as pay to visit national parks have a heightened sense of civic consciousness or are more aware of the need to protect the environment of the parks.

The passage does not say that in the country Illium entry to national parks and other public lands is free. On the contrary, it says that the best way to preserve public lands is to charge people 'more money when they are using national parks and wilderness areas for activities with heavy environmental impact'.

Some points in this observation need to be clarified. For one thing, why should the country Illium charge people 'more money' (than probably those of country Myria are charged) 'when they are using national parks and wilderness areas for activities with heavy environmental impact'? For another, what are 'the activities with heavy environmental impact'? Both questions have been left unanswered.

People go to national parks and wilderness areas mostly on picnics, and picnics do not take a toll of the environment unless the picnickers are out to vandalize the areas. Therefore, it stands to reason that 'activities with heavy environmental impact' include vandalism, if not big-game hunting in wilderness areas. If that interpretation is true, inflated entry fees may not be a deterrent to those so disposed. They will probably pay the higher entry fees and yet damage the environment of the national parks and even wilderness areas.

If, on the other hand, by 'activities with heavy environmental impact' is meant picnickers leaving the national parks and public lands scattered with empty bottles, sachets and other used material that ought rightly to belong to the garbage can, a high entrance fee may not work. A campaign for education of the public on proper use of these areas may, instead, pay dividends.

Finally, it is not clear who the people who 'overuse' public lands are. If they are those who go on picnics more frequently than others, collection of fees from them may act as a disincentive and make them use national parks and wilderness areas only occasionally. That, in its turn, will neither fill the kitty of the country Illium nor protect the environment of its national parks. The solution, therefore, seems to lie in collecting fines from those causing environmental damage rather than from looking askance at everyone using national parks and wilderness areas.

Of course, these lands need to be preserved for the present and the future generations, but that is best done through preventing and punishing their misuse rather than through discouragement of their use.


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