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The following appeared in a memorandum from the president of Mira Vista College to the college's board of trustees: "At nearby Green Mountain College, which has more business courses and more job counselors than does Mira Vista College, 90 per cent of last year's graduating seniors had job offers from prospective employers. But at Mira Vista College last year, only 70 per cent of the seniors who informed the placement office that they would be seeking employment had found full-time jobs within three months after graduation, and only half of these graduates were employed in their major field of study. To help Mira Vista's graduates find employment we must offer more courses in business and computer technology, and hire additional job counselors to help students with their resumes and interviewing skills."


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That there is much greater demand today than there ever before was for those who have done business courses is a truism. But it is doubtful if the memorandum has correctly pinpointed the difference between the treatment meted out to products of Mira Vista College and those of Green Mountain College by prospective employers. It is facile to assume that just because the Green Mountain College has more business courses and more job counselors than does Mira Vista College, 90 per cent of last year's graduating seniors from the former had job offers from prospective employers. It is not just the number of courses that matters. More important is their quality. Prospective employers test the candidates before deciding whether or not they fit the bill. So, although the memorandum does not talk about it, is it not possible that the standard of teaching business courses is higher in Green Mountain College than that at Mira Vista College? This doubt is buttressed by the admission that at Mira Vista College last year only 70 per cent of the seniors who informed the placement office that they would be seeking employment had found full-time jobs within three months after graduation, and only half of these graduates were employed in their major field of study.

Several inferences can legitimately be drawn from these few facts. First, only 70 per cent of the seniors who informed the placement office that they would be seeking employment had found full-time jobs within three months of graduation because the rest of the aspirants were clearly below par and, therefore, did not qualify for jobs. Second, if only half of those who found employment were employed in their major field of study, it shows that the fields of study at the Mira Vista College are not suitably graded to the requirements of employers. Third, it is no less clear that the job counselors at Mira Vista College, however few they may have been, did not prepare properly such seniors as had intimated the placement office of their desire to seek employment. As such, the suggestion in the memo that augmentation of the strength of job counselors in Mira Vista College might help improve the situation is clearly optimistic.

The suggestion that Mira Vista College should introduce more courses in business and computer technology to help more of its students find jobs on leaving college has merit. But the standard of education and the quality of teaching of these subjects are more important than the number of business courses introduced. Modern-day employers want only the best staff. The weak must go to the wall. Competition, be that in the commercial world or in the job market, has become more intense than it ever before was. In other words, the degree of expertise acquired by a candidate in his field of study is as important as, if not more important than, the course he has studied. In short, the best has become the enemy of the good, and good has no place in today's commercial world.

At such a time, what Mira Vista College evidently needs is not augmentation of the counseling staff but appointment of competent staff for imparting the right counseling to the students. If the present set of counselors had given the right tips to the students on how to prepare their resumes and face interviews, maybe at least a few of the 30 per cent not considered by prospective employers would have landed jobs. Similarly, a thorough study would seem to be needed by the college to find out the requirements of prospective employers. That should not be difficult considering that, against the 90 per cent of graduating seniors from Green Mountain College lapped up by prospective employers, 70 per cent of their counterparts from Mira Vista College landed jobs within three months of graduation.


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